Opinion Essay
Should we pay for listening to the music we like?
It's a good question, and no everybody can answer it. I think that we don't have to pay money for listening to songs, for the type of music we like.
In my opinion, we don't have to pay for listening to music. The people who are artists, the singers, they sing because it supposes to be the thing they like. Then, the fans, may not pay for listening to them. I understand that when they hold a concert outside, it's obvious that the people, the audience, had to pay for it because it's a live performance, and you can see the rehearsal too.
But when it's only a song, when you are in your home or even outside doing something, downloading the songs without paying is better.
I think not everybody can afford the price the artists or the music industry put in some albums or songs, neither in a albums store or in a virtual music store. The music industry only wants to have more benefits, and all they think is that they must to.
That's why I support the idea of listening to music in apps like Spotify or Youtube it's good, they receive money from those apps but you don't have to pay, both sides happy.
And to finish in my opinion we don't have to pay for music when we have free apps and when you can download free songs. And also because not all the people could pay it. Famous people might see a little bit the fans situation.
It's a good question, and no everybody can answer it. I think that we don't have to pay money for listening to songs, for the type of music we like.
In my opinion, we don't have to pay for listening to music. The people who are artists, the singers, they sing because it supposes to be the thing they like. Then, the fans, may not pay for listening to them. I understand that when they hold a concert outside, it's obvious that the people, the audience, had to pay for it because it's a live performance, and you can see the rehearsal too.
But when it's only a song, when you are in your home or even outside doing something, downloading the songs without paying is better.
I think not everybody can afford the price the artists or the music industry put in some albums or songs, neither in a albums store or in a virtual music store. The music industry only wants to have more benefits, and all they think is that they must to.
That's why I support the idea of listening to music in apps like Spotify or Youtube it's good, they receive money from those apps but you don't have to pay, both sides happy.
And to finish in my opinion we don't have to pay for music when we have free apps and when you can download free songs. And also because not all the people could pay it. Famous people might see a little bit the fans situation.
There are some things that you should correct. First, you should use more connectors. Also, somtimes while I was reading it, I felt like you were writing it like you would say it out loud, and I think that is wrong. Apart, there are some strucures in the text that are wrong.
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